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THE WOMAN IN BLACK

THE ART OF ADAPTATION

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Arousing the horror that lurks within a gothic mystery is a terrifying experience and proves that graphic dramatic action or blood and gore are no substitute for real fear.
The Woman In Black is such an astounding experience; cloaked in the mystery that shrouds a haunted house, the exploration of a young lawyer and single father exposing the truth behind deadly secrets and finding closure will have you on the edge of your seat.
The masterful suspense that is created from the opening scene, and meticulously suspended throughout the film until the hair-raising conclusion, is in the hands of director  James Watkins; he made his directing debut with the critically acclaimed thriller
Eden Lake (only released on DVD locally), that was declared 'the best British horror film in years' (The Guardian), and won the Empire Award for Best Horror, the Jury Prize at Sitges Fantasy Film Festival and Best Director at Fantasporto.
Watkins is a master of suspense, and in the tradition of Hitchcock, understands the mechanics of fear; he does not rely on cheap and nasty graphic gore to shock the senses, but with a skilled actor like Daniel Radcliffe in the lead, Watkins dissects fear to the bone and exposes the essence of what instils terror.
Screenwriter Jane Goldman, who is the author of four non-fiction books for young adults, the novel
Dreamworld, and the number one best-selling non-fiction, two-volume series The X-Files Book of the Unexplained, understands the world of fantasy and fear, and she perfectly captures the spirit of Susan Hill's hit novel, a dark tale of loss, vengeance and mourning that was first published in 1982, and has since been turned into a TV movie, a radio series, a play (that has been running in London for more than twenty years) and now a feature film.
Goldman also knows how to deal with the world of fantasy and intrigue, having previously co-written the screenplays for
Stardust, for which she won the 2008 Hugo Award for Best Dramatic Presentation, and the thriller The Debt.
The Woman in Black proves that in the end it is ultimately about a good story well told; Watkin's haunting visualisation of a world of sinister shadows and dormant secrets is captivating and creepy.
You know that fear grips your imagination and unleashes nightmarish visions when you find that you stop breathing; and in The Woman In Black, this happens quite often.
Fortunately, it is not a horror film, or essentially a story about a haunted house, but a beautifully crafted story about loss and the search for redemption.
Yes, this redemption could be vengeful and filled with anger, but in The Woman in Black it results in an emotional experience that breaks the heart and does not destroy the soul with mean spirited intentions.
It's a heart-rending romance about finding answers to the unhappiness that clouds reason and prevents us from bringing an end to the misery caused by apprehension and confusion.
It is not always possible to see through the mist that clasps the unsolved mystery in its clammy claws, but is it definitely possible to be consumed by the fear that hides within; it is this magic formula that turns The Woman in Black into an exceptional and rewarding visceral experience.
It delivers what it promises, but more importantly, it leaves one with a great story that guarantees to live on long after you have left the cinema. You are guaranteed to always remember The Woman In Black, she will taunt your imagination to ensure that you will never forget her heartbreaking tale,
Reviewed by Daniel Dercksen. Rating 5/5

The story
Young London solicitor Arthur Kipps (Daniel Radcliffe) is forced to leave his three-year-old son and travel to the remote village of Crythin Gifford to attend to the affairs of the recently deceased owner of Eel Marsh House. But when he arrives at the creepy old mansion, he discovers dark secrets in the villagers' past, and his sense of unease deepens when he glimpses a mysterious woman dressed all in black.

SUSAN HILL (Writer) was born in Scarborough, Yorkshire, in l942. She was educated at grammar schools there and in Coventry and studied at King's College, London.  Susan is married to the Shakespeare scholar, Stanley Wells and they have two daughters. She lives in Gloucestershire, where she runs her own small publishing firm, Long Barn Books.
Her works include
I'm the King of the Castle (Somerset Maugham Award), The Albatross and other Stories (John Llewellyn Rhys Prize), Strange Meeting, The Bird of Night (shortlisted for The Booker and won the Whitbread) and the bestselling Serrailler crime novels.
One of her children's books,
Can it be true? won the Smarties Prize.
The stage adaptation of
The Woman in Black has been running in London for more than twenty years.  Her other ghost stories to date are The Man in the Picture and The Small Hand.

JANE GOLDMAN (Screenwriter) started her career as a print journalist, working for a broad range of publications including The Times, Cosmopolitan, Smash Hits and the computer games magazine Zero.
She is the author of four non-fiction books for young adults, the novel
Dreamworld, and the number one best-selling non-fiction, two-volume series The X-Files Book of the Unexplained. She has also worked in television, variously as a presenter, producer and comedy writer.
She made the jump to screenwriting five years ago, co-writing the screenplay for
Stardust, based on Neil Gaiman's novel, for which she won the 2008 Hugo Award for Best Dramatic Presentation, Long Form. This was followed by screenplays for comic-book action movie Kick-Ass, and thriller The Debt, starring Helen Mirren and Sam Worthington. This summer saw the release of X-Men: First Class, which she co-wrote with director Matthew Vaughn and starring James McAvoy and Michael Fassbender

JAMES WATKINS (Director) James made his directing debut with the critically acclaimed thriller Eden Lake. Declared 'the best British horror film in years' (The Guardian), it won the Empire Award for Best Horror, the Jury Prize at Sitges Fantasy Film Festival and Best Director at Fantasporto. Before he moved into directing, James had a first-look writing deal with Working Title Films. Under this deal, he wrote several scripts including acclaimed horror-thriller My Little Eye. Other writing credits include Gone and The Descent 2. James has also written scripts for Film Four and BBC Films. He is currently developing projects with Warner Bros (producer David Heyman) and Pathe (producer Christian Colson).

From the hit novel by Susan Hill, The Woman in Black is a dark tale of loss, vengeance and mourning. Acclaimed screenwriter Jane Goldman brings Hill's story to the screen for a 21st Century audience. Directed by James Watkins and starring Daniel Radcliffe, Ciarán Hinds, Janet McTeer and Liz White, The Woman in Black is a Talisman production in association with Exclusive Media Group.
When Susan Hill published
The Woman in Black as a novel in 1982, she never imagined it would have a life across so many media. "You don't, do you?" she says. "You don't write it for other media. You just write a book and then other people take over."
But she's used to people adapting her work, especially
The Woman in Black, which has been turned into a TV movie, a radio series, a play and now a feature film. "The point is that the book is still there," she says. "It's the art of adaptation - which I could never do. With the play and now the film, each person has taken my book and remained true to the spirit of it, whilst reinterpreting it to suit the new medium."
This is the first time Hill's novel - now nearly thirty years old - has been adapted for the big screen. The project first came to producer Richard Jackson, of Talisman Films, as far back as 1997. Following the success of Talisman's production of
Rob Roy, Hill's agent approached Jackson to explore the possibility of a big screen adaptation of The Woman in Black. "It turned out to be a surprisingly tricky story to adapt," he confides. "Over the years, we made several attempts with different screenwriters to adapt the story and I was never fully satisfied with the scripts we were getting."
The initial impetus that breathed life into this production came from a meeting with producer and president & CEO of Hammer, Simon Oakes, who was, at the time, in the process of re-launching the historic Hammer brand. "I think it's fair to say I was cautious about where that would lead, as there'd been other attempts to revitalise Hammer over the years," reveals Jackson. "But Simon made it clear they were very serious and there was a level of ambition to ensure that we're making a film that would be very high-end and both respectful of Susan's narrative voice but at the same time that would appeal to contemporary audiences."
"Simon was always very clear to me from the outset that his incarnation of Hammer would focus on horror movies that were intelligent," continues Jackson. "And I knew that would be something Susan Hill would respond to favourably, as well."
For Simon Oakes,
The Woman in Black was one of the first properties of interest to the recently reborn genre label. "One of the things we talked about, as a team, when we first put this new incarnation of Hammer together was that horror is made of many different genres and subgenres but in recent years the tendency has been for body count horror."

The Cast and their characters
Casting the role of the film's protagonist, Arthur Kipps, director James Watkins sought a young actor with the talent necessary to bring the right mix of sadness and vulnerability to the screen.
For Watkins, Daniel Radcliffe, best known for his role in the blockbusting
Harry Potter series, was the obvious choice. "I met with Dan and we had a long chat, and we both saw the character in the same way," he explains. "Arthur Kipps is a very rich character for Dan to play, and a much darker place for him to explore."  Read more

Daniel Radcliffe
Radcliffe is, of course, best known in the eponymous role of Harry Potter in the most successful film series of all time. Read more

Playing the Woman in Black
Actress Liz White considers the Woman in Black to be a sympathetic character. "When you read the story you really get involved with the loss of her son and the distress that would have caused her," she says. "She's lost the trust of her sister, her father, her brother-in-law, and then to see her sister forsake the life of her child was the ultimate heartbreak."
White says that the costume and make-up helps her get into the character. "Immediately you feel so detached from everybody else," she reveals. "You can't look at people straight, and people don't look at you straight. Immediately you feel as though you're part of her world. I found it brilliant to play, because you can use your imagination and it's all about your internal life. For an actor, that's a joy."
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About Hammer
Originally founded in 1934, legendary British film studio Hammer has delivered a hugely successful run of films over the years including Dracula, Frankenstein Created Woman, One Million Years B.C. and The Vampire Lovers. Since 2008, the company has been part of Exclusive Media Group ("Exclusive") which is reinvigorating this beloved global brand through investment across both traditional and new media.
Not in production since the 1980s, Hammer marked their return to features in 2010 with the release of the critically acclaimed
Let Me In, an adaptation of the highly praised Swedish filmLåt den rätte komma in. The film was written and directed by Matt Reeves (Cloverfield) and stars Chloe Moretz (Kick-Ass) and Kodi Smit-McPhee (The Road).
In 2011, Hammer released Antti Jokinen's
The Resident starring two-time Academy Award® winner Hilary Swank (Boys Don't Cry, Million Dollar Baby), Jeffrey Dean Morgan and Hammer legend Sir Christopher Lee, as well as the critically lauded Wake Wood directed by David Keating and starring Aidan Gillen, Eva Birthistle and Timothy Spall.
February 2012 sees the theatrical release of Hammer's first ever feature ghost story
The Woman in Black, directed by James Watkins, adapted by Jane Goldman from the book by Susan Hill, and starring Daniel Radcliffe.
Hammer recently launched a new publishing imprint through Random House which has already published eight books. In 2012 the imprint publishes its first original titles with
The Greatcoat by Helen Dunmore and Coldbrook by Tim Lebbon. Also publishing in 2012 are further new novelisations of classic Hammer films.
Hammer is also broadening its reach, with plans for a Hammer Theatre of Horror and a Hammer visitor attraction, as well as continuing to honour the company's legacy with re-releases of classic films, official histories, merchandise, screenings and social media engagement.
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He explains. "We wanted to explore different kinds of horror, and while there'd been a TV movie and a stage play, we recognised a great opportunity in The Woman in Black to combine Susan Hill's gothic ghost story with a modern sensibility to turn it into a feature film."
The production sought a screenwriter capable of overcoming the hurdles experienced by those who had taken on the task in previous years. "We identified Jane Goldman as someone we all wanted to work with," says Jackson. "And she was excited from the outset. She was able to crack it in terms of overcoming the central problems of how to tell this story for film."
Says Oakes: "I'd read about Jane and knew about her work, and I knew she'd be right for it. Her screenplay made everything fall into place. James Watkins, the director, read it and loved it. Daniel Radcliffe read it right after the last day of
Harry Potter and loved it. Jane had a huge part to play in getting the right people involved."
Susan Hill says she was thrilled with the result. "When Jane sent me the script it was for me to look at it and say, 'Yeah, this is fine, but…'" she explains. "But I just thought it was terrific. Jane, I think, thought that I might be offended by some of the changes to the story, but that wasn't what worried me. What would have worried me is if she'd turned it into something like a comedy, but she hadn't. She's just so skilled. She's managed to make it her own while still allowing it to be mine."
Goldman was concerned that she strike the right balance of tone in writing her screenplay. "It's a tough one to adapt," she says. "It's a wonderful novel, and there was a brilliant theatre adaptation that was so much designed for the theatre. I think it was always clear, because it's a very economically told story, that to work as a film it needed additional layers."
She continues: "For me it was about introducing
The Woman in Black to a cinema-going audience. In a way, I was attempting to do in cinematic language what Stephen Mallatratt had done in the theatre."
Coincidentally, at the same time,
Eden Lake director James Watkins had read a story in the trade press about Jane Goldman writing the screenplay, and asked his agent to inquire about the project. "I'd been working on a ghost story myself, but I couldn't make it work for me," Watkins explains. "When I read Jane's script, it spoke to everything that I wanted to achieve with the other project. It just had that sense that it was scary but it also had an emotional element in it. It really moved me, and as soon as I'd read it I knew I wanted to do it."
"James is a very, very smart guy," says Simon Oakes. "He's a great director who understands both how to tell a story and how to get great scares out of it."
Watkins brings a relaxed attitude to the set, according to actress Liz White, who plays the ghostly Woman in Black. "I auditioned for the part about two months before shooting and at that first meeting James was just so generous," she says. "And he's been that generous throughout the shoot. I've always felt welcomed to
The Woman in Black family."
Working with Watkins, Jane Goldman began a process of refining the script; a process she believes has helped maintain the spirit of Susan Hill's novel. "In early drafts there were a number of flashbacks involving the Woman," she reveals, "but we were able to work through this process of continually dialling it back. I feel that it's much stronger because of that - there's not some American backstory about how the Woman in Black became the Woman in Black. It's not Freddy Krueger! It's about Arthur's experience of discovering these horrific secrets and our discovering what happened through his eyes."
Important for producer Richard Jackson, too, was that
The Woman in Black be accessible to audiences generally disinclined to enjoy genre cinema. "We're trying to ensure that the people who want to go and see a movie will consider The Woman in Black as their first choice because it's sufficiently well made to engage them," he says. "Regardless of whether they'd normally be interested in horror or those genre elements. And that's Daniel Radcliffe's attraction as the star - to encourage a much wider audience to buy their tickets and come and enjoy it

Adapting The Woman in Black - from novel to screen
One of the key changes made to the novel is the earlier introduction of Kipps's son who in the novel isn't born until after Kipps returns to London from Crythin Gifford. Introduced in Goldman's screenplay in the film's opening scenes, Kipps's struggle with being separated from Joseph during his time in Crythin Gifford becomes a key plot point and adds another layer of dread as the young solicitor learns the secrets of this curious village.
"We wanted to track that through the whole film," explains Watkins. "It's fundamental in terms of what drives Arthur. As with the loss of his wife; I wanted to explore the nature of his loss, and not have it simply as an abstraction."
"The novel works beautifully because it's completely in the style of a classic Victorian ghost story, where you don't ask the sort of questions that you ask when you watch a film," explains Jane Goldman. "'Why does Arthur not leave the village immediately? There are certain cinematic conventions that I think we needed to address. It was important to answer questions about what's driving this character and why it's important for him to remain in the village."
Although Susan Hill's novel - and, indeed, Jane Goldman's adaptation of it - tells the story of
The Woman in Black in the grand tradition of Victorian ghost stories, for Goldman, finding the world of the film involved researching some unlikely cinematic sources.
"The story is both unashamedly scary and full of this real, emotional depth," she reveals. "And in adapting it I kept coming back to some of the better examples of J-Horror in recent years."
The Japanese Horror genre, dubbed J-Horror and popularised by films such as
The Ring and The Grudge, has more than a little in common with classical Victorian ghost stories, Goldman says. "They're often devastating in terms of the emotional themes, but they're also properly scary. The two things don't have to be mutually exclusive. In Japan there's an enormous interest in the Victorian culture anyway, and it was interesting to see those films strike that balance."
For James Watkins, crafting a modern period film was an intriguing contradiction. "Intersecting the period world with the J-Horror world was very interesting and fresh," he explains. "The grammar of the whole film was something I spoke at length to (cinematographer) Tim Maurice-Jones about. I didn't want the film to look like a period piece. I wanted to shoot it with a very modern idiom in the way the camera moves, the way we establish scenes and the
mise-en-scène of the whole thing."
In defining the look of Eel Marsh House, the creepy mansion cut off from the village of Crythin Gifford by a causeway that floods at high tide, Watkins was keen not to play to ghost house stereotypes. "I wanted it to have this sense of decay, but I didn't want it to be a monochromatic cliché," he says.
With production designer Kave Quinn, he sought instead to make use of a rich colour palette, resulting in a decidedly more highly saturated look than convention would suggest. "The film has a very rich look," continues Watkins. "We have these kinds of bruised colours. The colours of decay and death: purples and blacks and rich, deep crimsons. I really wanted that sense of the beauty of the house to come through. At the same time, it's a haunted house, it has to have nooks and crannies and crevices and dark spaces. It's as much about the lighting as anything."
Quinn explains that the process of designing Eel Marsh House began with scouting the location for its exterior. "At the beginning of the film, we had a fantastic location manager looking for the right house," she says. "It needed to have its own persona, so that as soon as you saw it you knew it had some character to it. When you look at the house we found, it almost has eyes. It's a Jacobean building and the gable at the front gives it an incredible evil look."
With the location found, Quinn sat down with Watkins to fine tune her designs for the interior of the house, based on the rough blueprint of the exterior. "I gathered together loads of research materials on things like staircases and panelling, and I knew which way I was going to go with the colours. We used bruising purples and mouldy greens to give that sense of decay."
Finding a real life location to play the odd village of Crythin Gifford proved even more challenging. "In the 21st Century, obviously anywhere we'd find would be busy and full of cars and road signs and newer buildings that needed covering up," explains Quinn. "We wanted to try and find somewhere that had almost been untouched by time, and the village we found, Halton Gill, was right in the middle of the Yorkshire Dales, so it isn't anywhere you'd ever pass through. It hadn't been over-developed, so all the houses are original from something like 400 years ago."
The collaboration with director James Watkins has been "unbelievable," says Quinn. "From my first meeting with James, we just really gelled."
"Kave did wonders as a production designer and she's an amazing woman," agrees Watkins. "She really understood what I tried to get at. We designed the long corridors and the depth, so I could have real depth in the frame in the Polanski sense of looking through doorways and half seeing things."
He summarises: "A ghost story is what you can't quite see - what's in the corners of the frame and what's in the margins. That was something we built into the production design."
"We're filming in 2.35:1 instead of 1.85:1," says Jackson, referring to the super wide aspect ratio favoured by epic Hollywood productions. "That's a strange choice, you'd think, to begin with, because when you think of 2.35:1 you think of a big Western, and when you think of a small, claustrophobic ghost story, you think of it in 1.85:1. But it's turned out to be really exciting as a way of shooting the story."
Cinematographer Tim Maurice-Jones says that the primary direction he got from Watkins to define the look of the film was one simple word: "contrast". "We've been trying to light the sets with a single source of light only," explains Maurice-Jones. "A lot of films will use a key light to light the face, a fill light to light any shadow that's left, and a backlight to pick them out against the background. We've been trying to use light and shade to achieve that sense of contrast with just one light."
Watkins also chose to play with the basic conventions of filmmaking in order to add to the unsettling sense of dread that hangs over the film. "We used what we could to just throw things slightly off balance," he reveals. "I've shot at multiple frame rates and shutter speeds, we'll have jump cutting, discontinuous editing. You don't want to be tricksy - I can't stand that - but anything that serves to tell the story honestly, and that's the key for me, is valid. No rules necessarily apply, and to have that freedom to explore is interesting."
"We've been very organic in that respect," agrees editor Jon Harris, "James is great at coming up with ideas for things to pop in just to make it a little creepier. It's very back-and-forth with us. We'll put things together and see what works and then if he's still on the same set he can add something to it, or apply the idea to another scene."
He continues: "We're trying to achieve something akin to peripheral vision. Although I don't believe in ghosts, whenever I go into an old house you find things moving in your peripheral vision. We've been talking a lot about how to achieve that on film, because you can try to make the audience look at one thing, but they'll look wherever they want to."
Watkins describes his relationship with Harris as incredibly collaborative. The pair worked together on Watkins's feature debut,
Eden Lake, as well as Harris's directorial debut The Descent: Part 2, which Watkins co-wrote. "Jon's been a big part of the constructing of the film pre-edit as well," he reveals. "He shot Second Unit and was very much a part of the script collaboration process with me and Jane."
Says Harris: "Between the two of us we know what we need to make the film work. I work in the edit during production and I keep an eye on what's being shot, and the pickups list, to make sure we've got what we need."